Thursday, October 14, 2010

Bowling for Columbine

Why are there gun murders in the U.S then any where else in the world? Is it because guns are easier to get in the U.S?
Topic Sentence: Is it easier to buy guns in the U.S?
Example: Michael Moore visited Canada to see how easy was to purchase ammunition. He went to a Wal-Mart and bought a box of 30.06 Winchester ammunition with out giving them his ID and he isn’t even a Canadian citizen. It seems that guns and ammo are just as easy to get in Canada then the States.
Explanation: If Michal a foreran citizen can buy ammo at a Wal-Mart that shows that in Canada it is just as easy to get guns. Also Canada has just as many guns as the U.S
Topic Sentence: Does the U.S have a higher gun murder rate because racism is higher?
Example: If you turn on your TV in the U.S.A to the news you are most likely to see a cop arresting a black man. A good example of this is South park history video of the white people and black people. When he visited Canada he found that Canada has just as many black people as the states.
Explanation: If Canada has just as many different races that cant be it. Also if you turn on a TV in Canada you will see the same thing.
Topic sentence: Is all the murders tide in with the there violent history?
Example: Is the violent history of the states the reason that more people die of guns each year then any where else in the world? An example of this is the video he shows us of the violent history of all the countries.
Explanation: If all the other countries are violent or even more violent it can’t be there history then.

Conclusion: Michel Moore’s conclusion on why are there more deaths from guns in the United States was that the government has to stop setting a bad example to the rest of his country. He also thinks gun control should be better. He thinks that the selection on guns should be more limited (No automatic weapons) if the government improves on these things there will be less gun murders.

1 comment:

  1. This needs to be formatted into an actual essay. Edit and remove the labels (ie - 'topic sentence', 'conclusion')

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